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Review:shenanigan says:
Jane, I literally devoured this chapter. I read every word, hanging on each letter, until the very end. And when I finished, I went back up to read it again. I just... I love this story. I don't know why. Maybe it's the characters, maybe it's the writing, but something about it makes me jump at every update.

In my opinion, this chapter was kind of a - for lack of better word - filler, but I think that's just fine. You managed to summarize everything without being too vague or too hasty. Though next chapter, you probably want to have more detail/dialogue to make the story "fuller" and to keep your writers from organizing an angry mob. Because we all want MORE! *brandishes pitchfork threateningly*


Oh, and the alliteration was absolute love. I think that would have to be my favorite part. The way you write... Dominique's character just shines so clearly. And I think that her going to Beauxbatons was very feasible. I've seen many stories with the same idea, so I didn't think it was the least bit far fetched.


Okay, so I'm going to wrap this up now, but all in all, this was an amazing chapter, and please update, update, UPDATE soon :)

Zoey

Author's Response: Lovely, lovely Zoey ♥ You flatter me far too much. I mean, you say things like this and then I go off and read your work and spasm with jealousy :P. It means such a lot that you're enjoying this though.

Filler it is, but to be honest, I don't exactly know what this whole thing is. I mean, to me, it's not a proper WIP and I'm not quite sure why. It's almost just a little thing on the side that I like to write for something different. That's why I'm so surprised that you're enjoying it so much! Hahaha, I'm hoping to shake things up a little in the next chapter, although, how I'm going to do that is yet to be determined :P.

Is it ridiculous that I didn't notice quite how much alliteration there was until you said this? It sort of is XD. I'm a ridiculously big fan of using it though, especially when attempting to be vaguely poetic.

Hahahaha, my exams will probably prevent updates until... July? -hides- Thank you so much for reviewing though!


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