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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
But... but... but... this is the end? :'-( I feel the need to put that in all caps, but won't so that your ears don't explode with my screams. Oh my gosh, how could you end it like that? Evil, evil Gubby, leaving the reader off on such a note.

You know that I loved every bit of it. The words, the phrases, the sections, the whole - all brilliant, making this chapter the best part of the story.

The madness of both sisters, so overwhelming and disturbingly real. I could feel their madness within me by the end (partially explaining my highly emotional reaction to this chapter :P), the strangest combination of fury and fancy. It was a shock hitting the parts with Draco and Hannah, who are both very down to earth and solid (I know that it could be argued otherwise for Draco, but I find him very easy to pin down and understand in this story). How you organized the sections was perfect in this way, moving the story along and pushing the reader along with it.

That ending! I'm could go on about it for a LONG TIME (uhoh, the caps have appeared) because it's just so shocking and unexpected. I did honestly believe you'd end it like a fairy tale, even when the boat appeared (and my stomach dropped, knowing what could happen and not wanting it to :P). But I love how you did this ending with Daphne tricking him - she wants to keep him near, perhaps because she's gotten her revenge and needs something else to live for? Or am I trying too hard to find happiness there?

I bow down to the master. Gubby, you're amazing. This story is too, but only because you wrote it. ^_^

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