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Review:Margravine says:
Hello my lovely twinsa ♥

I actually don't know how to review this because it seems horribly self promoting to say that this is beautiful, but I WILL say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

LOVED the title, am glad you left off the surplus of commas, think you did a wonderful job of a 500 word story. GORGEOUS SHIP BTW!

I KNOW how hard this challenge is and I think you've done amazingly. It 'feels' like me if I'm allowed to pretend to be objective and say so, and there are lots and lots of lines - like this
drowning in waves which crash and fracture before her, left with naught but sandy stretches of self that she loathes
and this
Then there is him. He is a man and she is a girl and she does not believe it to be impossible that she loves him.

which made me go all 'wish I'd written that!!!'

ANYWAY must flit off, but hope I can do half as well for this challenge!

Author's Response: Hello, darling ♥

Ahahahaha, it could possibly have come across that way, apart from the fact that it's not really like you at all sometimes, and when it is sort of like you it's rather bad. I think there is a name for that. Oh, yes! FAILURE :P.

It was inspired to my constant listening to Ingrid Michaelson's 'The Chain'. I was just listening to it on a loop and picked 'Promise' out from the line 'And promise not to promise any more'. I couldn't resist ♥ AND YES, GEORGIA DREW MY ATTENTION TO THIS SHIP OF BEAUTY.

I think what benefited me from this challenge and by 'being' you, was the fact that I had to expand my vocab a little :P. I couldn't just stick with my same old expressions; I had to really discover new turns of phrase and little used words and such.

HA. You could write something much better in an instant.

You did marvellously- far better, in my opinion :P.

Thank you so much for reviewing ♥

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