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Review:shadowycorner says:
Just as I was about to throw myself out the window to have something better to do - seriously, where do you come up with this stuff? Or, the fact that Scorpius looked more like a rat than a person. Apparently it was all about personality nowadays. I just adore her narrative. Each time I try to write a character like this, I fail miserably because it is just too annoying to be in their heads. I think that even my attempted-humor characters are annoyed by themselves. But Molly is fresh and wonderful and has great commentary on all these events.

Like the entire interview session or her talk with Rose, who was interestingly portrayed, might I add. I felt like giving her a right shove up the...well, you know the rest.

The last part? FABULOUS. Teddy appeared again, which was yay, and this other man...I'm curous about him, especially since he's Teddy's friend. oh my oh many possibilities of where this could go and I just cannot wait to find out!

I really, really like this story. I rarely just crack up repeatedly while reading a chapter, but this time I did. BIG TIME.

xoxo Liz

Author's Response: Clearly, I am a very negative and volatile person and find it easy to come up with bizarre things like that :P. First person is something that's actually very new and unusual for me to work with. I tend to steer well away from it, but this is so much fun to write as a little refresher. And I like being snarky XD.

Hahahahaha. I'm normally a really big fan of Rose, but here she just came out as a completely vile person, lol. I really enjoyed branching out with her character though and it's got an interesting reaction from the readers.

Who knows what'll happen with him. And he's IRISH. Isn't that lovely? I think he and Teddy probably fancy themselves as Jack the lads.

Thank you so much for reviewing, Liz! I'm really thrilled that you liked it! ♥


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