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Review:leeann says:
i have just read your story and it's good, but there is so much monotony and tediousness. there was so much of asking so...what do you want to do?-I don't know what do you want to do? Also the drama is never ending and again it's always the same drama over and over and over again. Like with Raine, people are mad and frustrated with her then they aren't then they are and then they aren't again. i just feel that if you have 102+ chapters, then you should have more variety in the story so that your readers do not get bored. because honestly speaking i was bored and only read about 20 of the chapters, but because the whole story is so repetitive i didn't miss anything.

Author's Response: Thanks for the ideas - I wrote this story over two years ago now, and I'm just still trying to finish posting it. I know there are a lot of problems with it but I was writing with someone else and the first story takes a lot of work to figure things out. Overall I feel like the other stories we've written are better however the first two aren't so good. I found the drama annoying writting it but Raine was her character and I wanted to kill Raine because what she kept doing what annoying so I found it hard to write the characters not wanting to do the same.

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