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Review:LindaSnape says:
Like I said on msn, for what it's worth, I really liked this.

It was poetic and gripping, and the pain was realistic. It wasn't all moany and teenagery like you warned me that it was. I mean, yes, she was very angsty, but I think that's realistic in unrequited love.

No one wants to be invisible, and everyone wants their chance at romance.

Yet, I like that she's conflicted. She's not a vicious part Veela monster bent on ruining their romance. She's human. She cares for them, and doesn't want to ruin their romance for she knows that she had no justification for it.

However, she can't stop loving Scorpius.

I loved the eloquent vocabulary and the scope and depth of Dominique's emotions. She wasn't just a whiny teenager that didn't care about anyone else.

She was very realistic. Not to mention selfless. It was very sweet.

So, yes, as you can probably tell from my gushing - I loved your description of Dominique and your characterization. It was wonderful, and she's easy to relate to.

I loved how while Rose/Scorpius were included, we don't know anything about them except they're serious about one another.

This was very beautiful and I enjoy this! :)


Linders

Author's Response: Linders this made my day! Honestly, coming from you it means a lot, as I have read some of your writing and your very talented.

Everything you said here made me jump for joy because I was feeling somewhat self-concious about this one-shot. I was scared it was too whiny, or too overly descriptive. That you didn't think so meant a lot.

As for the selfless thing - her personality would have changed entirely without your help. By suggesting I cut that one paragraph, you improved the entire story. I'm glad you sympathize with Dom, I didn't want her to come across selfish.

This review made my day. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave one, I am in your debt!


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