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Review:Little_My says:
Well, first of all I do, after reading allthe 58 chapters over the past few days, why it's awarded the most addictive sory award, because this is addictive!
It's a really really good story, and the way it has evolved seem really natural. The way Laura has evolved from the beginning to now, and the realationship between her and the other girls and particulary Sirius, is brilliant.
hough I most say, I was a bit mad at you for killing Mary. Mostly because I liked the way you portraited her, and I mis her acsent.
Actually, I'm really fond of all the characters and the way you do this canon. You manage to write a mauaruder era without all the clichés, and I like to think that this is the way it did happen before the HP-books.
ANyway, brilliant story =)
Keep up brilliant work would you, can't wait to read the next chapters!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! I do love getting reviews from new people ... well, I love all reviews, but you know what I mean. :)

First off, I'm impressed that you read all 58 chapters in only a few days because I'm the first to admit that there's a lot to get through. I kind of went overboard when writing this story, probably because I wanted to get all the canon bits in. My own fault for being a canon nerd, I think. I'm glad that you like the evolution of the story, though, because I'm pretty big on character development, and it was necessary for my story plan to actually work. I needed the relationships to evolve in a natural way and it sounds like you think I've achieve that so thank you! *beams*

And I'm sorry about Mary. She was a great character and I enjoyed writing her, but my main character needed a major upheaval in order to move her own life along, and that was what worked best. But yes, I too miss her accent. It was a lot of fun. :)

thanks again, Mel

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