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Review:Liisarr says:
The first thing you might want to think about it Sirius' attitude towards Dumbledore. To be honest, he would probably refer to his as Professor and I definitely don't think he would be so blunt, at least not at the beginning of their meeting. As it progressed I can imagine him getting wound up and acting in that way, but I don't think he would do it at first. After all, he was eager to do his part for the order, but he couldn't due to the fact he was still a wanted wizard criminal.

Is the title meant to be similar to the movie title? xD It reminded me of that, anyway!

Other than that I noticed a few grammar and spelling errors, but they would be easy enough to fix if you just read it through carefully once more.

Let me know if you write any more chapters, I'd love to read the rest!
I hope this helped. =)

Author's Response: Thanks again for the review!!! Actually the title was more literal and I wasnt thinking of the film at all because I hate Zeffron with a passion lol. I'll be sure to sort those errors out and perhaps revise Sirius' characterisation too. Thanks again!!!

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