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Review:inthedeadofday says:
I like it. i really do.
But I am going to critique you on one thing:
Scorpius'POV. I like Rose's, she's interesting. has more than just one thing going on in her head.
But Scorpius's seems like all he thinks about is Rose. Not to mention, it takes some of the mysteriousness and all out of his character. If you just stuck with Rose, he could explain all of his reasons for doing things and such later, and we'd be left wondering what the heck is going on, and therefore reading more.
But that's just my opinion.
I still like the story.
Just think about what I said.
Much love!
P.s. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for comment! I totally see where you're coming from. Because Rose is the main character, I tried to give her more depth than Scorpius, I only really write from his pov when he's thinking about Rose. But I understand why it seems like that's all he ever thinks about! (because those are his only parts I write) I'll try to work on that, and I'll try to add a little mystery too! :D

Thanks again!
-Ronsgirl29

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