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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Again, a brilliant chapter!
I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
Your plot is absolutely awesome! Wow, including Sirius? Haha, and I love the whole idea of your story. It's just great, and you've written it so that it flows so well!
Characters - portrayed exactly how they should be.
Spelling/grammar - fantastic. Again, the only mistake I could find was in the author's note haha.
"Than you everyone for such positive feedback :) This will be a relatively short chapter that will undoubtably leave more questions than it answers but I hope you all enjoy it :)"
Probably more of a typo than spelling - but thanK, and "than it answers" doesn't need the IT.
Also, this part doesn't make sense: "Before either Hermione or Sirius had a chance to speak, Albus Dumbledore waved his wand and OUT them both in to an enchanted sleep. He had work to do." Did you mean PUT?
Anyway, fantastic. Pure talent.

Author's Response: Darn my typing skills! yes it was supposed to be PUT but I seemed to have missed that typo *sigh* Thank you so much for the reviews they really put me in a great mood for the rest of the day XD

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