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Review:Jackson Robles says:
Humph. That little crystal thing is interesting. The summary of your final chapter leads me to believe that someone other than Louis implanted that thing on Louis's charm thing.

Scorpius and Lily are coming along nicely, although I'm still having issues with the other characters. I can't really see Electra as corporeal, though Chelsea is much better. I'm sure by the end of the fic however everything'll be how it should be.

Off to nine!

JD :)

Author's Response: Hope so, though not sure she develops overly. Glad Chelsea is more real to you now though.

As for the crystal... hmm, I may need to look at avoiding that being too obvious!

Thanks for all the support and critiques!

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