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Review:Capella Black says:
"A hell of a lot more," he added under his breath - I realise this wasn't a comic piece, but this line cracked me up! Very Draco, which is true of the dialogue in general in this piece.

I also enjoyed the way we were thrust into a very AU world, where bit-by-bit, the reality of the situation was revealed. I think more of this might have been even better - how and why are Draco and Hermione together, why is Draco impervious to Voldemort's spells? This left a lot of unanswered questions, and while that is great, a few answers might round it out a little.

I also like the way you slid in and out of Malfoy's inner thoughts - maybe some additional musings around Hermione would work?

Overall, I liked this piece, despite the swearing (beginning to wonder why I bothered saying no offensive language!). Nice work - always enjoyable to read unique stories, and this is definitely a new idea to me!

Author's Response: I actually intended that to be comedic as I felt it needed a little lifting. I'm actually hoping to do a series that accompanies this but it may not be until August I'm afraid. Also, the spells not working was my subtle attempt at the love protection magic. The idea that Lily died to save Harry is shown in the idea of Hermione died to save Draco. I hate swearing in my fics and only use it when absolutely necessary but Voldy was telling me it had to be used then.
Thanks for the great review!!!

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