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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hello! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this D:

Again, really great update. I love the way you're developing this story. I'm always afraid of writing characters that are really well developed, not even in HP, but all characters - Sam and Dean included. You're writing them really well though; everything they do and say is very believable :)

This addition of Caitlyn and Riley is such a great twist! The first thing I though when they handed Sam and Dean their address was that it might be a trap. I have a feeling there are more twists in this story than you make it to seem, and it's putting me on edge. Which is a great thing!

I absolutely love how you ended the story, with that murder spin. Ah! Such a great cliffy :DD

Great job again!

Author's Response: Hey Katrina! It's okiedokie.

Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it. Oh, that is something I am constantly worrying about with this story because they are such amazing characters and I do not want to mess them up.

I'm glad that you found it surprising. Nah, it's not a trap. They are legit. Oh yes, I got plenty more twists planned for this story. Hehe, I'm glad it is.

I'm glad you liked that. I originally wasn't going to introduce Devon and Lilith so soon, but this story is beginning to take on a life of its own and it made the decision.

Thanks! And thanks so much for another lovely review!

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