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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hello!! This is Katrina from TGS with your requested review :)

I think this beginning was really good, especially with the vibe you were going for. It was very mysterious and kind of makes me feel like I'm walking through a dark, smoky tunnel. It was very elusive for the reader, but I'm assuming that's what you wanted, so that's good :D

I think the length was fine. It's a prologue, so it doesn't have to be long, and it achieved that sense of intrigue for the reader!

Onward :D

Author's Response: Hi there Katrina! Thank you! Yes, the elusive feeling was exactly what I was going for. :) Okay. It's comforting to know that the length was good, although I was more worried about the first chapter since this one is just the prologue. Thanks for stopping by to review! Your feedback was very useful. :)

~amandatonks


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