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Review:propertyoftheHBP says:
Oh my goodness, this was so funny! Where did you get the idea for Ron to lose a toe, of all things? And I loved how it was stated matter-of-factly, as the equivalent to a Muggle child losing a toy (or having it been stolen...). It was written very realistically for the Wizarding World.

And oh, poor Ronnie-kins. I absolutely loved these lines:

"Without his toe he'd never feel the same again and he certainly didn't want a new one."

And

"Sure, it may've had some fungus growing on it and it had been a while since he'd bothered to bite off his toenails, but it didn't have anything contagious."

xD As well as the dramatic scene with Molly clutching Ron to her chest.

I thought that this one-shot fit in pefectly with the characterization of JKR's Weasleys, and would feel right in place with her books. I loved it!

10/10

Author's Response: -scratches head- I sort of got the idea from myself. I left some nail clippers on the floor and stood on them, clipping of a bit of my toe xD It made me laugh and seemed like a Ron kind of thing to do, so I changed it a bit and created this.

I'm so glad to hear you like it. I pretty much love you for this review xD. And I did a fist-pump at the JKR comment. That's what I was aiming for because she writes fairly simply and I have a tendancy to over complicate things. Success!

Thank you for the lovely review :D

Lorren.

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