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Review:Renegade Niffler says:
This was really funny and a nice light read. You created some very realistic moments and captured some of the essence of living in a household with many children. I especially liked Ginny bashing Ron with a spoon, though I think Molly would have scolded Ginny as well as Ron. Percy was good too, very in-character.

I would have liked it to be a bit longer, maybe with some description of the chaos caused by the search.

Overall this was cute, clever and very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you :D I've never written, or even thought about writing, the Weasley's before so it's good to hear I got something right! Yaaay!

I agree that Molly probably would've scolded Ginny too, but she was a little distracted and the thing in my family is that I've always been able to get away with a little bit more than my brother or my cousins, who're all boys, so I thought it would be a bit similar to that in the Weasley househole... That and I forgot to put that in, haha -bad author-.

I think if I wasn't so impatient with myself I would've put something in about the search, but I just felt like I was being repetitive, and I didn't want to be boring. As well as that, I had this in the pipeline for a good 5 months and had lost some of my ideas for it, and the ideas I could remember didn't fit in with what I wanted the new ending to be (originally, he found his toe... but then I quite liked the idea of him going to Hogwarts with only 9 toes and this being something JKR never told us xD).

Thank you so much for the review!

Lorren


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