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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hello! I'm here with your TGS requested review :D

This was a great first chapter! It was like a bang without a bang. Very mysterious indeed!

I really enjoyed the way you laid everything out really well, and gave the reader a fair amount of information to work with. I think my favorite part of this chapter was the way you kept referring to Mad-Eye. It was really clever, especially since we know from the books that he was her mentor.

Really great job! :D As usual, though hahaha

Author's Response: Hello Katrina!
Thank you so much for the thoughtful review. As always, I really appreciate your feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed the prologue. To be honest, I was quite unsure about it myself. Opening chapters are always terribly tricky for me to write. ;)

Again, thanks for everything! Your reviews are always so kind. Take care!


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