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Review:Capella Black says:
Curiouser and curiouser. I'm liking this latest twist, even when I usually hate any story involving pregnancy. Really like Sirius going back too.

Again, the flow is spot on, and the characters are well within canon. You've picked up Sirius perfectly - that mix of hot-headedness and bravery, with bluntness to boot. I also liked the simple visual description when Hermione entered - it was vivid yet didn't pull away from the general story-telling. Nice!

Author's Response: hehehehe its not the twist you think and thats all im saying!
Ch3 is being written and entitled The Phoenix Gate. Hopefully ill put it in the queue today.
Thanks for the review!!!
Kero


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