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Review:Capella Black says:
Wow, for a first post this is really brilliant. Congrats!

This story is simple, completely in character, and somewhat moving. It really captures who Neville is and his motivation for striving to succeed. I like the fact that you didn't have him dwelling on the negatives when he was with his parents - having him trying to see the best in the situation was far more poignant.

Moreover, you've managed to write fan fic which enriches the HP world, without it being a romance. That makes you awesome.

Your grammar and spelling are all fine too, which is a major problem in some other stories, so hurrah for that. All in all, a great piece, so I don't have any useful con-crit to give. Would love to see how you'd get on with a longer piece, involving more plot, so if you find the time to write one, please request again so I can R&R!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

It's always nice to get feedback, even when there isn't any CC... wait, scrap that - it's best to get feedback when there isn't any CC! There are a few grammer mistakes here I know, but I tried to proof read this a gazillion times to eliminate as many as possible!

I wish I could write a longer piece, I will jump for joy when I do, I just don't have any inspiration at the moment. Oh muse, where have you gone?!?

Thank you again for leaving such a wonderful review, I will definately return to your review thread if I post a story in the future! (Fingers crossed!)


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