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Review:LindaSnape says:
Oh, this was beautiful! I absolutely adored it! It was so terribly sad, though, for her.

I suppose, in the end, she's content, but it would be sad to have all those lovely names picked out and yet no child to call her own. When she had the miscarriage I was so disappointed. I was hoping that she'd be able to have a child, but that didn't happen, either.

Though, she still managed to be happy in the end.

I love the characterization of Victoire and her reaction when Dominique was going to have an abortion. I think that it was very realistic, given the personality you gave Vic. I couldn't believe that Dom was so tactless.

It seemed evident that Vic loved children.

I didn't see any glaringly obvious spelling or grammatical errors, so kudos there. It does make things flow easier when there's nothing to jar the reader's focus.

The word choices were absolutely phenomenal and I loved the poetic tone of this piece. It was terribly romantic and yet so tragic, yet so beautiful. All at once.

It was very poetic. I enjoyed that, very much.

Very nice job!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it! (blushes)
You are too nice, as I am not too used to these compliments. =P

I've never been a huge Teddy/Victoire shipper or reader but I thought this suited Victoire a lot. I've always imagined Victoire to be like that, a little whimsical and emotional and an exteme romantic.

As for the poeticness, I've been experimenting a lot with different plots and styles, so thank you! This means a lot :)

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