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Review:EleanoreRosier says:
What a powerful story!! It is absolutely amazing. I have read it in the past and I thought you lost your inspiration but clearly, I was wrong. YOu are back and your writing skills are amazing.

I was in Alanna's position once, knowing the man you love is cheating on you but I was unable to react. I was paralysed.

Rabastan doesn't love her but, he can't live without her. He's been used to her docile presence and naive personality. Malina is Alanna's opposite. She is strong, cunning and able to draw Rabastan's respect.
I like Alanna even thought she is weak. She is blind by her love for him and as you pointed out, he is a real bastard to her. I am not sure of his relationship with Narcissa but Alanna is clearly the least of his priority when it comes to women. He only cares when he feels he might loose his domination on her.
I trully hope she'll open her eyes and she'll be able to find the strenght to leave him. As I said before, I feel a gread deal of sympathy for her and pure hatred toward Rabastan (I can't stand cheaters!!!).

I hope you'll update soon. Your story is amazing and really moving. It's 10/10 for me!!!

Just another thing, english is far from being my mothertongue and I hope my review will be understandable.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it's been a while, but I'm trying to update within a month.

All your character analyses are spot-on! Malina does draw Rabastan's respect, but she is too much Rab's equal for him to stay with her. [Plus she's married. :P] Rab isn't just a cheater - his character is deeper - and perhaps you'll feel less hatred when we see what his life is like. Then again, maybe not. :P Yes, Alanna is his least priority because she allows it. I'm glad you empathize with her; it means I'm doing my job as a writer. As for Cissy, you'll have to wait and see. =]

Thanks once again for the long review! I appreciate it.


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