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Review:Renegade Niffler says:
Wow. This is really powerful. I think you've done a great job capturing Neville's feelings, and created some really nice moments. I also like how you portrayed his Grandmother, showing her sternness without making her too cold. The pacing was good as well. Great job. :)

Author's Response: Wow - my second thank you to you today. First I was thanking you for leaving a lovely, inspirational comment on my blog, second for leaving a lovely comment on my one-shot.

I'm glad you liked my characterizations. I was worried Neville's thoughts were a bit too poetic/over-dramatic, but I wanted there to be more to him than the clumsy person people presume he is.

I'm really pleased you mentioned his Grandmother. Whilst she is always described as being strict in the books, there is a moment in OotP where she is very loving towards Neville. Ovbiously after that he shows he is an awsome person and slays Nagini... So everybody loves Neville. Yay!

Once again, thank you very much. I'm glad the pacing was alright - sometimes I tend to go off on a descriptive ramble from time to time...

I really appreciate you took the time to review, they make my day!


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