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Review:ayii says:
Wow.

Can I just say, wow?

This is very, very creepy. I wasn't sure what to expect from it at first - while I love dark stories, I have to admit to being pretty bad with horrors. I mean, to say Goosebumps used to give me nightmares as a kid! Aha, so I tend to avoid them. But the summary on this just sounded too good to resist!

I really love how it begins, with the psychiatrist trying to convince Rose - especially about the cat. You can feel both how frustrated Rose is and how exasperated the Dr. Abbott is. Then the wonderful journey to her home back on the Knight Bus. I love the letter, although it seems a bit odd to me that they wouldn't find it odd that Lorcan doesn't speak anymore? I know I would definitely be worrying if one of my relatives - or anyone really - just stopped talking. Although it could be self imposed silence, but to sit staring at walls. But then I suppose if they didn't believe Rose, they wouldn't suspect anything with Lorcan.

I have to say, I feel really sorry for Rose. How desperate she is to get home when she finds out about Lorcan - it's a little bit selfish, though, about how glad she is she is not the only one. But then that's human nature. I think anyone in her position would feel the same.

The Parisian disease routine was really cute, really painted their family life. It must have been so hard for the family, Rose moving away and stuff. Not to mention, they all must have thought she was pretty unstable. I also absolutely loved Ron and Hermione's relationship - it was done really well. Plus, I'm a huge supporter of those two so XD

You leave it on a brilliant cliff hanging, and I beg you not to leave me hanging for too long XD I would really love to see more of this. I am really into this, and I don't know if I can't wait too long for an update, aha.

And may I go off topic a little to say how sad I am to see Sunday's Ashes go? I read it a day before you deleted it, and never got to review it! I really loved the start. You write so well, I really need to get round to reading more of your one shots and other WIPs. You have such original ideas - I don't think I've read anything on HPFF just like this, or like Sunday's Ashes! I suspect the same goes for your other stuff. Really enjoyable.

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