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Review:ohcrapidroppedmybrain says:
Woot! We are getting somewhere! I can't tell you which chapter I liked more, the last one or this. They are both so mysterious but you allow us insight on the main characters' mission. It's a gift not a lot of people have, and whenever I read a story in which someone does, it instantly lifts my spirits. Anyways, on to this chapter!

So they were finally at the Order, and they both are American? I remember you mentioning something about D's fake British accent in the last chapter, but I thought you were going along the lines of proper British. I know that's silly. When they came into Headquarters and saw the portrait, I did an air punch. It's still AU, but you add a lot of the HP universe in it. And Fred and George crack me up :)

K can't remember where she had seen the Order's faces. She did lose her memory, so that's acceptable. But she can't remember who she is either? Really intriguing; you're really going on the right path!

More D and K action! I'm officially supporting this ship now. I'm just a little upset I can't give them a snappy little ship name. Curse the one-letter names. Anyways (I was getting off topic) he brought home a dog and then carried her to bed? Sure, that's partnership. I can see right through them like a sheet; I just hope that they end up together *takes out flamboyant fan t-shirt*.

10/10!

P.S: D is a muggle-born? Suspicious, how you snuck that fact in the dialogue. I have a feeling this is important in later chapters, but correct me if I'm wrong :)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I was nervous that the balance of the mysterious and the explained might not work out.

It's great that you picked up on it. I work really hard to stick in those canon details. I go on fact-finding missions over the tiniest details.

Haha. Yes, no snappy ship names for you. Sorry about that one. I didn't think of it at the time.

Thank you for the review. It is very much appreciated.


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