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Review:kandekisses says:
Ahh! I m so sorry for the wait =/

Your right.. this is definitely a bit different from what you usually write but its just as brilliant. That was so beautifully written, I can only imagine how much work you put into it.

The most amazing part about this story is the fact that I read through it not once thinking about how there's no dialogue. That's such a hard thing to do and I think you did it really well.

I love those last two lines so much. It makes such an impact. How in the world you thought of the torture devices I don't know but it really showed the connection between Fred&George. They didn't need words, all they needed was each other.

Watching them wither away was so sad. How can people be so cruel to put people through something like this. The twin's whole jail stay was so heart-wrenching for me. At the end where George is about to go and Fred becomes overwhelmed with that incredible magic made me so happy. I really like how you connected it to how Harry survived the killing curse.

Also by the two staying in silence even after they were free, I think was the perfect choice. They went through something that no one else can understand except for each other.

Wow. There's so many parts I'd like to comment on but I just can't form it right in my head. So sorry bout that. I want you to know though that you shouldn't be too worried about this story. Its amazing like all your other work. You always stir up emotion in me which is kind of hard to do.

Brilliant job my dear! I really enjoyed reading this one-shot. Keep up the good work =)
I look forward to reading more from you.

Author's Response: You're sorry for the wait! I'm HORRIBLY sorry for the wait for this response! I thought life would calm down after Spring Break but it actually seems to be moving faster and faster and I'm getting farther and farther behind! I hope you can forgive me for being so slow!

Thank you so very much for such a glowing review of this story! It was very hard to write and even now, after hearing many people give it good remarks, I'm still not entirely sure how I feel about having written it.

You know, this was the ONLY way I probably could have done the lack of dialogue and not hated it the entire way. But somehow this fic came out in such a different form and style that I usually use, it ended up being very easy to do the lack of dialogue. Of course, that was the only easy thing about writing this. I'm so glad you didn't mind the missing dialogue! Means it worked.

I love Fred and George. I know you know that already, but I can't help saying it again. I love that brotherly/twin bond they share and there aren't nearly enough stories out there that focus on that. So I couldn't stop myself from doing it here.

I'm so glad you liked the plot and flow of the story, and weren't put off by the lack of what some people might consider vital information (why were they there, how did it happen, who did it, etc.) The staying silent thing at the end was painful to do (I basically stripped my favorite joking duo of their jokes and laughter) but I knew it had to be done to finish this story correctly. Thank heavens this is a one-shot and I don't have to keep them that way. :D

Once again, thanks so much for the heavy praise! I can't tell you enough how much it means to me! I hope you can forgive me for taking so long to reply to this wonderful review!

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