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Review:ohcrapidroppedmybrain says:
Hello dear! I read this last night and loved it, and am here to fulfill my promise of giving you a great review. Enjoy!

First off, this is an anarchy type of fic, no? The Ministry is imposing unjust laws and such, causing certain groups to react (Order of Phoenix?) I take it that K and D are part of a different group than the Order? I'll eventually figure it out.

I like what you did with the names. It is incredibly clever of you, as it helps your plot out A LOT and makes the reader wonder what their real names are. The curiosity is eating me up! I forsee more explanation in the future, so I won't harass you about it :)

I like K. She seems very dynamic and human, even though she's some sort of super-human spy. You blend in her character well with the plot and leave it up to the readers to infer things. I imagine her to be a tomboy and lively, although she won't think twice about kicking someone's butt if she needs to. You did an amazing job with her, dear :)

Oooh, D! He's sexy, with all his muscular goodness. I see a lot of chemistry between him and K, even though they are only pretending to be in a relationship. I hope that they end up together. Plus, he's very nice and sort of a joker, which evens out K.

Tonks! OMG! I love you for putting her in here, because I was so heartbroken when she died in DH. It was so abrupt, and anyways...it brightened up my day. You made her Tonks-ish but a little darker, perhaps reflecting the dark events that have passed.

Your narrative was totally good. You made no mistake in POV or tense change. I have so many questions already. Why is it so dark? Who is K and D, really? What will they do at headquarters? Perhaps more answers in the next chapter?

Author's Response: Goodness! I'm so sorry I didn't respond to this sooner! I have no excuse, really.

Sort of an anarchy-type fic. But only because this is a circumstance in which seventh book never happened. It seemed too easy to me, so this is the story of the war that I think might have happened instead.

I'm glad you liked the naming convention and yes, you will one day get to know more. Just not quite yet. I'm also glad you like K and D and even more so that you like them together. I tried to make it so that it wasn't a huge stretch to see them as a pair.

I love Tonks too. Which is probably a large part of why she's still alive here. That, and the climactic battle of book seven never happened.

As to your questions, I shall take the route of an evil mastermind and simply say, "Mwhahaha!" Anyway, thank you for the review! I appreciate your time.


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