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Review:Amberfire says:
bloody hell.
*stares at RonsGirlFriday*
How in the world did you think of this?
Merlin...

Wow that was... just... beyond words. The simplicity of the last line:
'But mainly, Ronald Weasley is sorry for being such a waste of space.'
folds the entire story up in such a meaningful way. God, how, oh how did you manage to put so many emotions into this?

The significance of how he dies is truly brilliant too; you defined Ron, just by his death.
And the way it was split up into sections - 'attack', 'pin', 'kingside', 'en prise', 'end game', and 'checkmate', made each part of the story, and the progression of the poison, stand out. The 'Checkmate' at the end gave me shivers; just so final.

and his relisations at the end about Harry and Hermione - 'Not just sorry that he allowed himself to be consumed with jealousy towards the only person who ever treated him like he was fine the way he was. Not just sorry that he was a right prat to the only girl who ever meant a damn thing to him.' That, that was perfect, that was Ron. Well done.
Amberfire

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