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Review:Inti says:
Melissa! Am here to review, seeing as what how this was my challenge and I said I would and all.

Seriously, I loved it. For all you said it was spontaneous and unplanned, it's fantastic. My favourite part is probably a little out there, but I just adored that she was called Maggie.
You built her up as this soft, angelic, etherial, cherubic piece of perfection, then she has a name like Maggie. Not a bad name or anything at all, just in such contrast to how Lysander describes her. It's perfect really.

The start and end are both utterly love. So bittersweet and twisty and sad. Such an interesting way to use the blue, although mildly disappointed not to have a few-thousand words squeeing over the scarves :P

Thanks so much for entering the challenge, I really do hope you had fun with it!

Author's Response: Jack!! Thanks so much!

I am glad that you liked this... I know you and angsty fics, so I was a bit hesitant. But I had no control over how this fic turned out. once it was finished, I decided that it was a story about the cycle of pretty people.

I love your description of Maggie. It is spot on to Lysander's vision of her. Cherubic is probably the best word.

yayyay! The start and end were a product of complete spontenaity so it's wonderful to hear that they worked out. In my defence, I did mention the scarves... :-P I just couldn't very well have Lysander hot and worked up about a silly thing like scarves.

This was a very fun challenge!! Thanks for reviewing, Jack. :)

-xx-
Melissa

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