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Review:ladymblack says:
Okay, so now it's my turn to review for you. Upon seeing the length of your next saga, I can see how you don't really have time to read anything else.

I can only guess that I had stopped following stories for awhile, and yours somehow got lost, since I know that I'd read most of it before. But, in an attempt to find something good to read while I work, I found you once again,

I only have one request for your next fic (a bit belatedly): watch your commas. They should always come before and after a name when a person is being addressed (in conversation). There are other times that you miss them that cause me to pause and wonder as to your actual intent of meaning.

Otherwise, this is such a wonderful story that captured my heart. I hope to see a bit more action in the next fic, but for the most part your writing will keep me hooked. Good Luck in the next!

LadyMBlack

Author's Response: LadyMBlack,

Thanks so much for coming back! You're right, writing this story has kept me busy, and since this is only a hobby, sometimes real life and work keeps me interfers with even that!

Thanks for the tips about the commas. I will try to watch that going forward. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I hope you enjoy the next one as well.

Mrs_Granger


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