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Review:ItsUnconditional says:
I almost cried when I read this chapter. It was so emotional and ever so realistic. Especially when her mother remembered her, that made me feel as if I wanted to hug her.

For a moment there I actually thought that she was going to break up with him. I was even prepared to start yelling at my computer screen about how she can't break up with him because he's waaay too perfect for her :D

I adored the chapter (as always). The character's are always written amazingly and you're such a brilliant writer. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next :)

Dee, x

Author's Response: oooh i'm sorry you almost cried Dee! *hands kleenex in case* I actually teared up writing it. it was very emotion to write and now that I really think about it, it was an emotional read! I'm glad you liked how her mother remembered her. I thought it gave some light to a very emotional subject. I know how Steph feels because my grandmother had a stroke a few years back and then suffered memory problems. so that particular subject hits close to home for me..so it was easier to get across her emotions...

yeah I would never let Steph break up with Louis. I'm not that cruel. If they weren't together, there'd be no story! And I'd be sad...

I'm thrilled you liked this chapter! It's probably one of my favorites because of how it ends with her mother saying her name. I'm looking forward to future reviews from you! Thanks so much for sticking with me! I'll update soon! :)

Sarah



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