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Review:Squid7000 says:
This story? Awesomeness in it's purest form.

Seriously, you are an absolutely incredible writer, this fic has an absolutely incredible plot, the characters are absolutely incredible and the whole story in general is just . . . reall cool:)

Erin is a really great character; she's far from perfect but still has good points about her. I love her fascination with humans and seeing the world through her eyes. You truly give an entirely different perspective to the world. It's awesome.

I laughed SO hard with the whole "Odd Hair" thing. And "Well I don't even care that you're pretty!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Ang, ugh, I really want her to make up with Jack. I LOVE him. Seriously.

Honestly, just the way you write her and how she's so matter-of-fact about everything. "I'm not going to marry you." And "I have the strange feeling he would like to marry Lily." Just everything she says has me in stitches.

REALLY great stpry! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Squid

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, your review made me so freaking happy. Really, I bounced around the room for at least five minutes. I'm so glad that you like my story.
I'm glad that you like Erin and appreciate the need for character flaws. A lot of people think that she's too arrogant, but if she wasn't then it would be more difficult to show character growth.
I'm glad that Odd Hair made you laugh. That was a scene I wasn't sure about when I wrote it, so I'm glad to hear that it was successful.
And oh my gosh, I absolutely love Jack as well. He's by far my most favorite character that I've written about. Don't worry, Jack will return, because he's just too awesome to disappear indefinitely.
I'm so happy that you liked it so much. Thanks for the review! :)


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