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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hi Jo! I'm here to review the story!

I love this chapter! First off, think separating each house was a great idea. It really showed all lot of the unexpected similarities between the houses. I definitely wouldn't have imagined some Ravenclaws thinking that Grindlewald was logical!! And it was nice to see Orion and them looking at the other Slytherins like they were stupid.

I really enjoyed the order you put it in. It was like from the "Bad" guys to the "Good" guys -- but in reality, both were pretty stupid save a few.

I'm sad I didn't read this in the regular order, because I can feel the importance of it to the story. It was a great chapter just because it showed everyone's perspective on this war, and how immature almost everyone was (as in the student body) .

Don't worry about this chapter not being noticed! It'll be read by the many new readers you'll get and they will enjoy it and love it to no end!

xoxo

Author's Response: Katrina my dear! Thankyou for reviewing, this chapter is terribly lonely! I'm so glad enjoyed this chapter, it's not my favourite, but I think it was quite necessary for the plot and to make the transition to Christmas.

You know what? totally didn't pick up on that order significance, but you're right!

I'm not too fussed about this chapter being read because the view count has gone up, but for ages it was v. v. low and made me sad :( Newer readers actually get a much better experience because I've edited extensively and add chapter images and all.

You are a darling Kat, I appreciate your cheerleading and enthusiasm so much!
xx


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