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Review:FoundriaPenguin says:
Cliffhangers! Honestly.

Hello again! This chapter was very well written, too. In some places, though, there were some missing commas. I don't know if that's because HPFF has done something weird with the new layout (I love it, don't you? ;] ). There are a few run-on sentences as well, so you may want to check over this chapter again.

The plot is gaining more tension! The storyline is a bit cliche, but this is, after all, a fluffy story. Going on to read the next chapter!

~foundriapenguin

Author's Response: This was a oneshot I broke up because of the potential for cliffghangers, I must admit. I am awful with commas, so it is probably me :(

LOVED the prank, it was their best yet. Yes, couldn't keep any story tension less for very long. This is very very cliche, but it was my attempt at writing a fluffy happy piece :)

Thanks for the lovely review!

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