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Review:LilyPie says:
one constructive critique that i have is that the part right when she dies should be moved tot he end. so the chronology is reversed, but then it ends with her death. it was great though, really reallly good. im aobut to go check to see if you have any other stories!

Author's Response: That's a very interesting point! I'll definitely have another look at the story and see if a little bit of re-jigging the order would work ♥. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I've got quite a few other bits and pieces, so I'm sure that you'll find something to your taste.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

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