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Review:mizzxpearl says:
Hey! I know this isn't the story you requested me to review, but I saw it on your author's page, and I really do love Lily and James, so I decided to give it a read. :P

This was so cute! I love how she's so into the whole 'it's auburn, not red!' It's an originial idea to make a one shot out of, and I'm a little sad I didn't think of it first! :P Hehe, but great job!

I really loved James in this. I always end up loving James in everything, but I really did like him in this. You were able to show the fact that he was in fact, a bit arrogent, but you showed his other side even more. That's a lot of accomplish in a one shot!

For advice, I'd say to pay a bit of attention to your commas. Comma's are hard, everytime a reread one of my stories, I always find a misplaced/misused comma.

All in all, I liked it. Keep writing!:D

I'll be getting to your requested review soon.

Author's Response: Hello!

Haha this story idea was inspired by some of my friends who were having an argument about the color of the sky..yes, some weird friends I have, right? (;

Thank you so much for all the compliments :O And yes, I admit it, I have the comma disease >_< Either I put too many or I put too little, and I find myself stressing over that a lot!

Thanks for the wonderful "extra" review!

~foundriapenguin


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