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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hello Ty! I'm here with your review from the forums!

I was curious, and felt that I owed it to you since it's taken me a bit of time to review this story, so I read all the previous chapters.

I really like this story. It's very different, especially in your characterization of Victoire. I'm so used to seeing either perfect Victoire or mean Victoire...this is very refreshing.

Your plot also seems to be well thought out. I can feel little hints and things being thrown at me, although I can't completely tell what they are or what they mean. I'm really enjoying it overall though. I think the only thing I'm confused about is her condition. At first I thought she was transforming into some sort of bird, but then the fairy thing lost me. But other than that, it's love!! It has that mysterious x factor that makes me want to keep reading! :D

Great job!

Author's Response: You are such a darling for reading so many chapters! I am so excited that you liked the story and Vic.

I have put a bit of planning in - with a mystery, you really need to know where you are going with it. Hopefully, everything will be crystal clear in time, but it wouldn't be much fun if it all made complete sense up front.

Victoire transforms into a bird - a snidget, to be precise - although I might need to drop a few more hints upon revision of that first transformation. I wonder if I may have been too subtle there. No one has guessed yet, or if they have, they didn't leave it in a comment.

Not leaving enough is as bad as giving too much away so it is tremendously helpful to get feedback on that - knowing what is in store makes it difficult for me to judge sometimes.

The fairies definitely have an agenda - unrelated to her condition - but at the moment they are mostly a pain for Victoire.

Thanks so much for the review!

~Ty


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