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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hi Marina! I'm here with your review :)

You did a really wonderful job with this. I actually tried to read this a couple of times already, but couldn't get myself into the right mindset. This is one of those stories that you need to read each and every word to fully understand what is going on - and I still don't know what happened LOL

But the mystery aspect was wonderful. In the back of my head, I was trying to figure out who was who the whole entire time. I still don't know (except for Teddy - but you gave that to me LOL, and I don't know WHICH Teddy), but it's made me want to continue reading to find out.

The way you wrote this was just really beautiful. I really loved the line, "He wove in and out of their lives like needle and thread, the figures of eight making her dizzy with confusion and each time her life changed path." I just thought it sounded really poetic and was a great comparison to someone who changes your life in such an amazing yet brief way.

Onward :)

Author's Response: I think what I was trying to get here was that mystery, so I'm sort of glad you were confused ;) Ted is Ted Tonks, if that helps you at all! I hope to reveal more as the story progresses... or rewinds, however you want to look at it. But for now, mystery it is! thanks so much for reviewing!

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