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Review:collette michelle says:
I love reading your stories because they always open my eyes to things I have never read, or really seek out! This might be due to the fact that my reading window doesn't stray much from my favourite pairings.

Anyway, this first chapter was great. I always loved the ideas of the paintings in the books. I mean, talking paintings that can move from frame to frame. Can I be turned into one, please? I loved that they gossiped too! If I was a painting, I would too! I'd probably be the biggest gossiping painting that hid in various parts of the castle's paintings to hear as much as possible.

The Fat Lady is great, from the beginning, I loved her sarcastic demeanour. She and Vi were great too. I love the 'voice' that you have given her. Her voice here fits that from the books when we get those brief bits of dialogue from her.

I was a bit confused when reading due to the two parts broken up, but then I realised I was a fool because I misread and thought it was a one-shot, when really it was a WIP. Ha!

My only bit of crit is that I would have personally liked to see more of the whole Sirius episode, maybe more of her thoughts or something. I realise the moment might have just happened VERY quickly, but I dunno, with it being such a vital moment that is memorable, I think you could have gone a bit more in depth. But that's just my opinion.

Great first chapter, this story defiantly is something different and has potential to really go somewhere, Emma!
xx.
Collette

Author's Response: Terribly sorry for how late this is - I keep forgetting to respond to your last review. XD But thank you so much! I like to write things that make me branch out and try something new, so I'm glad you like reading them. :D

I think we got from the books that Vi was a gossiping old hag, but she is SO much fun to write. XD Especially in the second chapter - oooh, as soon as I get my laptop back there shall be a second chapter, I swear!

I looove FL too - her voice is just so much fun. And I'll take that crit onboard - I wrote this over two years ago (gulp...) so I'll look over it and see what I can do!

Thank you so much for the review, my darling, I swear I'll get to more of yours soon!

- emma xx


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