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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Hi, it's JaneTwilight from the forums here with your review!

The unhealthy relationship that I gave you involved a person who was in love with somebody else, but the person they loved had a dark sceret and they didn't know how to handle the situation.

I have to say that I think you handled that relationship very well throughout the entire story. I like the way you wrote everthing in third person as well, it added to the interest in the atmosphere.

I think I've already mentioned how much I admire your writing style, it was as brilliant as ever in this one shot. I couldn't spot any grammar or spelling mistakes and you used a great range of vocabulary in your descriptions.

The characterization was very good, I couldn't pick up the names of the characters, but I really admired the loyalty that the male showed towards the female, despite the fcat she was a thief.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, from what I've read so far, this is the best in all the challenge entries, the deadline is in six days so you should find ut some time around then :)


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really had some serious doubt about this story, to be honest. I felt as though I had drifted away from the prompt you had given me, and I'm really, truly glad to hear that I hadn't.

I wanted something different for the story, that yes, the relationship was unhealthy...but yet, not? If that makes any sense at all. I also wanted the protagonist to be male, instead of female. Ah, that poor guy.

Your compliments are so wonderful. They've truly made my weekend. Thank you so much for the praise and for such a wonderful challenge!

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