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Review:xkaittloveex says:
Hello, xkaittloveex here from the forums to review your story!

Oh...my...goodness. This may just be my favorite story I've ever read on HPFF. Ever. Yes, that's right...my favorite. I'm literally at a lost for words right now and tears are leaking out of my eyes, but I will try to compose myself and write something useful. Actually I'll probably just blubber about nothing but I LOVE THIS. I hope you understand how much I honestly do.

First of all, I love Draco Malfoy. He is one of my favorite characters in the series. I absolutely adore him. Pansy, on the other hand...not so much. And I never liked them together either. I found it to be completely wrong. However, this story is completely RIGHT. I love how the reader is able to see a different side of both Draco and Pansy. I LOVE reading stories when Draco is caring and kind and loving and just perfect. They make me so happy. This story made me more than happy though. It made me glow. Well...it actually made me cry but you get the idea. Draco was portrayed as someone who honestly cared for another human being (something readers of HP don't really see a lot) and that was a nice change. When Pansy practically begged for the confirmation of Draco's love the tears began to fall from my eyes. I love seeing characters who are usually so tough finally so vulnerable. It makes one realize everyone has a little bit of vulnerability inside of them. It was beautiful so well done on that aspect.

I loved the setting of this story, too. It was an interesting place and definitely fit very well. Kudos for that, too.

When it came to language and tone and grammar...it was all there. I didn't have a hard time reading this - everything flowed. In fact, sometimes I read it so quickly I had to go back and reread again. I was that into it. In fact, I think I'm going to be rereading this often - I loved it that much.

I feel sad I can't give you a real critique because I just love this story THAT much. I just...ah...it was so AMAZINGLY FANTASTIC. I'm sorry to disappoint if you wanted something more technical but I'm definitely giving this a 10/10 and it would be higher if I could go past 10. It was beautiful and passionate and filled with emotion and I loved it. I will be sure to recommend this to anyone and everyone! Please keep up the incredible work!

- Kaitlin

Author's Response: You complimented me quite a lot in here (and sometimes through an apology).

Thank you. Thank you very, very much. I'm glad you liked this work. I'm very proud of it, and I'm relieved you were so taken with this work.

And that's quite the claim. Makes me blush, don't cha know?

Considerable work has been put into this small little work, just to make sure that the flow has been perfected (causing some avid readers [we won't name them :P] to read so quickly that they miss a few things and must go back, which in turn is all part of the plan) and all grammar should be 100% correct.

Trust me, if I were honest I'd rather have you say my piece is a ten out of a ten (pushing 11, if breaking infinity were possible. Huh. Breaking Infinity. I like that) than have you tearing it to shreds grammatically. I'll call Apop for that, haha.

I'll definitely work on keeping (I wrote 'creeping' first. that'd've been weird. O.o) the good work up! Thank you so much for the review, Kaitlin, I really appreciate it!
Jackson


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