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Review:datbenik513 says:
A few remarks first.
Your spacing needs to be fixed as for some readers it can be quite distracting.
First paragraph: 'in case owls where intercepted' should be 'were'. Just a typo.

Indeed, the new school year couldn't possibly have started worse. You managed to cram in quite a few interesting details in order not keep the reader bored! In medias res, on with the fun!

You clearly own Hufflepuff. Apart from a few names like Ernie, Hannah and Susan, they were underused in the books; way to bring them back and give them a bigger role!

All in all, a nice chapter full of some truly Hitchcockian suspense!

Author's Response: Sigh. The spacing issue. I have had some serious problems with spacing in this story. For some reason, I paste it with the appropriate spacing, then it tells me I need more spacing, so I fix it, then I get it rejected because there's too much spacing, but it won't even accept it for review unless I put 32480934 spaces in between paragraphs, and on and on. I am so frustrated with this, so I completely understand how annoying it is to try and read. Thanks for sticking with it! I'm in the process of editing, so when I submit the changes, hopefully it will be worked out.

I can't believe I put "where" instead of "were". I'm an English major for goodness sake, and typos like that are my number one pet peeve. I'm so embarrassed. Thanks for pointing it out! :)

So glad to hear you're not bored. It's a little tough, because I want to remind the reader of what we already know about Hogwarts during DH, without basically re-writing the whole book! So I'm pleased that I added enough stuff to make it a little fresher.

I completely agree with how underused most of the Puffs are. I am a very proud Hufflepuff myself, and so my biggest complaint about the series in general was the lack of Hufflepuffs! Although I will admit it makes it a bit more fun to write about characters that were underdeveloped in the books, because I can pretty much do almost anything with them. :)

Thanks for another fantastic review!

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