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Review:theelderwand says:
Not to be redundant here, but, FINALLY!

The love scene was not overdone, nor was it underdone. However, I have a sneaking suspicion there was much more to it that the ToS forbade. Unfortunate.

Great touch with the crepes. A man who won't make breakfast for his gal the night after...

The slides between past and present were, again, smooth as silk. I did spot some grammar issues and minor word repetition, nothing to get in a row about. On the whole, the writing is superb.

What a nasty way to end; I do hope the updates are coming soon because you've got me exceedingly curious as to what Hr has just read! Which, of course, means that you've accomplished your goal. Great Chapter!

As to your considering leaving HPFF, I sent you a pm. But, allow me to say that HPFF would be the poorer for your departure. Yours was one of the first stories I began reading when I became addicted to this site last summer. I'd hate to see you go.



Author's Response: 1. HAHA, well they haven't even been together THAT long...

2. as for the love scene, yeah you're right... there was half a scene missing there. a lot of details in the story have to be omitted for ToS, but i place a warning in chap summaries every time.

3. darn, i thought my beta got them all :- oh well, it happens, i hate it.. but it happens. i apologize.

4. the cliffie was... not my favorite element but necessary to me in that moment.

5. *blush* wow, you hav no idea how much it warms my heart to read that, thank you!!!

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