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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
Ahh Celeste, this was fantastic! (Of course :P)

I think I realised about a quarter of the way through what this was about, and it certainly was a heartbreaking realisation. The characters were drawn to perfection- every thought of Hermione's felt 100% natural to the book. She really came alive and stepped out of the page. The mood of her thoughts was also completely fitting to the occasion.

I especially loved the subtle or not so subtle hints you added to some sort of history. Rose getting married to Lysander, and the line about Rose not speaking much to Hermione anymore was heart breaking in it's own way.

This really proves that your description, while gorgeous, is not all there is to your writing (I never felt that before, but this is by far the least description saturated of the stories of yours that I have read). It was completely character and plot driven, yet somehow it felt even richer than your normal stories. The emotional intensity was so strong, I felt that any description could have ruined it,

Dear god, I really am rambling. Your work tends to do that to me :P. Let's just say that I loved this, and this will take its place amongst my favourite one shots.

Becca x

Author's Response: Becca!

Thank you for reviewing! (And ignoring the 'of course' bit there - you know how I take those kinds of comments :P). Your comment about Hermione had me grinning. She was so hard to write! I'm glad she didn't come out completely distorted!

Ah, Rose. I've heard it happening to some people and I thought I'd incorporate that parent-child distance with Rose and Hermione. Originally, I was going to slip in ScoRose, but my love of Rysander took its lead!

Yes! You got my logic of no description behind this piece! If I had put in description, I would've slipped into a Celeste-style description, rambling about the wind and such, and that would've been completely OOC for Hermione, who was entirely focused on Harry.

Thank you, Becca! I'm not sure why I received such kind words, but I love this review! -hugs-

- Celeste

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