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Review:xChickWithBrainsx says:
I liked it (obviously!!!) although I'm thinking that the end was maybe a little too sudden and unexpected - I personally think that Hermione is a little more empathetic (is that how you spell it?) and not that mean... if she didn't like him, I don't think she would just say it like that - and as for ron, I know that rejection is bad, but I'm not sure if he's that sort of person... Obviously this is your interpretation, but you may want to develop them as your own characters a bit more first!

Also, it might have helped if you had lenghthened the argument scene, so that you could really portray how the characters are feeling, you know? Just a suggestion though!!!

I liked your dumbledore as well - it seems like the kinda thing he's do (not tell the whole truth, etcetera)

love the story so far, and I blame you for dragging me away from my challenge story, that's annoying me!!!

~beggee

Author's Response: hehehehehehe. Thanks for the review. As for the short argument, there is a specific reason that Ron reacted that way but thanks for taking the time out of your busy schedule to review :)

~ The Beggar


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