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Review:propertyoftheHBP says:
A hilarious missing moment! I loved the way you fit the flashback in, and the way the two incidents were mirrored. My favorite line was probably the running thing with the cane:

"Up his fat -"

And all the variations of it. xD

The voice of the map was so funny as well, especially when it kept calling them "the red-haired Weasels". I did feel bad for the Marauders in the end, when they lost the map. Poor guys. ;) They did have a good deal of nerve, though!

Oh, and your dialogue is superbly written between all of the characters.

Absolutely wonderful, a 10/10 for sure.

Author's Response: Wow thanks so much! I had so much fun writing lines such as "Up his fat -" and so on, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading them too ;) I wasn't entirely sure how to get the voice of the map going, but it kind of came after a while (and they really are red-haired weasels, aren't they? Haha...) Thanks so much for all the uplifiting comments - honestly, you've made my week :D Thank you so much for taking the time to review and thanks for reading!

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