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Review:LindaSnape says:
Hehe, relieved that it was Hermione/Ron. Because I adore them so, and don't worry. To me it didn't seem to suggest Ron/Hermione. Because I can know what it's like to be missing a friend and it is something like this.

You think about them, you want to talk to them, but they're gone. You wonder if you'll see them again and you think about when you will.

I really like the Hermione you presented here. It's a lot different than the Hermione's most people paint. She isn't bossy or fighting with Ron, she's missing an old friend.

I think that you managed to portray that well.

Don't worry, late time writings happen to the best of us, I think, but this is coherent and it makes sense.

I like how she reminisces of her days at Hogwarts with Ron and Harry. It's a bit basic and bare bones, but I do like the emotion expressed in this.

The flow, as always, was fantastic. You have a way of pulling readers without giving the entire idea away a summary or starting paragraph. Though, your structure has a lot of brevity and terseness; I feel like you still manage to capture a lot of feeling in your pieces.

Nice work!

Author's Response: Hey, sorry for the late response!

I really adore your reviews. Every time I see your penname, I smile a bit. They always brighten up my day. :)

Hermione was tricky to write. I'm glad she came out decently! I had to keep that emotional side of her visible, while still showing that she was the same Hermione who bossed around Ron and Harry.

It is definitely bare bones and basic, but I wanted to keep it as simple and as raw as possible. I think if I'd fleshed out Hermione or the setting too much, I might have taken away from the emotion.

Thank you s much! As always, I love hearing from you! :D

- Celeste


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