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Review:IloveNeville says:
That was so good! I really like the whole premise of this story. The domino effect and how one person's life can change all those around them in an enormous way. Makes me feel a little more special about my own existence, lol. I really liked how Lily whispered at the end that she loved James. How she's stopped lying to herself about her true feelings. And I don't think Dumbledore was out of character. He's a pretty difficult chap to write, so I think you did pretty good at that. I can't wait to read more of the story! Please update as soon as you have time.

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Author's Response: You have to be THE greatest reviewer! I love the idea of the domino effect, and I couldn't help but put it in an HP story. You should feel special about your own exisitence! Everybody is put on this Earth for a reason, and that is the point of this story! I'm glad you liked Lily telling the truth. I thought it was REALLY cheesy, but I couldn't think of anything better. Dumbledore has to be the WORST character to write! He has so much depth, it's horrible to keep him in character! I'm so glad you thought he was though! That was probably what I was most worried about. I'm working on the next chapter, I've just been very lazy as of late, lol. I'll try to update VERY soon. Thk you SO much!

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