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Review:RonNiffler says:
Hello! RonNiffler here from forums!

Can I just say I love your way of writing! It's just so much detail! Just the way it flow is fantastic! So great job!

Just a warning though, your writing style is very unique and some people may have trouble reading it. I think you'll be fine, just warning you ahead of time.

'Without warning, ragged coughs seize his chest, stealing his breath and squeezing like unseen hands.' Wow! Great line, I can clearly visualize this in my mind!

Wow, just the way you describe all this I feel like I'm there. And yes I feel like I'm about to cry.

And now I am in tears! Your last line 'Words like alone.' Was so sad! Beautifully written! Great, great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know this style is not for everyone, so I'm thrilled you liked it! It was actually rather different from the style I usually write in anyway, but it was really fun to try something new. Although, fun seems like the wrong word given the subject matter of the fic...

Telling me you could visualize the scenes and felt like you were there are two of the greatest compliments ever! It means all that time I spend agonizing over the right word to use was worth it, so thank you!

Sorry about the tears! Well, actually, I'm not, because that also means I did my job with this, but honestly I didn't make you cry. Should I send over some tissues?

Thanks for such a great review!

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