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Review:collette michelle says:
I think this might be my new favourite of all your one-shots, Rachelle.

I really love the idea of the ship, I think it's something that you were able to explore so much because, though we know of both from the books, we don't know that much. It gives you a great deal of creative freedom to come up with two believable character. Both of which I loved, Dean was so innocent, and Daphne so darling.

The whole 'drawing' thing, something that can come off a bit 'stalker-ish', is instead darling.. or... sweet... or some better word I can't think of. And what Daphne wore, I love that. I wasn't necessarily expecting that, but then again I hadn't known what to expect. I liked that it was kept simple, just three short-to-the-point lines.

Lovely job as always, my darling! I can defiantly tell you enjoyed writing this.
xx.
Collette

Author's Response: I owe you such an apology for not replying to this and the other review sooner but I'm just incapable formulating responses to them.

This ship is now gaining on being my favourite. It has so, so much potential and I love writing the two together. I never thought I'd find a Slytherin so easy to write but Daphne is so vivid for me. I really love her.

I hadn't even thought of it as stalkerish, really, until you brought it up and it definitely is a bit like that, now I think of it :P

Yes, those lines are actually disappearing now that this is becoming a short story. They'll probably come back at the end of the piece, though, because I want to bring it all back to the title.

Thank you so, so much Colllette. I really did enjoy writing it and enjoyed writing the next chapter too.

Thank you - I can't say it enough
♥
xx

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