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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Hey! Here from the forums, with your review. (:

Firstly, I adore slash xD. I don't get it requested enough, which is why I'm glad you did. (:

Okay. Now onto actual comments.

I loved the line "I know that some like it hot." I like how you repeated it, and how it kind of contrasts with the title, just a bit. (:

Secondly. I love, love, LOVE your description. I'm horrid at it, and I always respect authors that can write it with your fluidity. So, great job on that. Really. :D It made the entire story that much more enjoyable to read.

And that romance. :D I love Remus/Sirius! :D Favorite slash pairing, methinks... I love your portrayal of them, of them kind of switching out of the 'regular roles' many fanfic writers place on them. And it was sexy (can I say sexy in a review?) without being overly graphic (Had to mention; I've read more then a few blogs about NC17 stuff. Sorry. ;D)

There really wasn't anything that I disliked about it. I loved the pacing, the flow, the entire thing. You really did a great job with this. (: The only thing I would say, is that it was quite short, but the entire thing was very nice.

And by the way, I adored the ending. (: It was sweet, romantic. Really nice. (:

Sorry there's no concrit, but I honestly couldn't find anything I didn't like!

10/10.
-Jasmine

Author's Response: Hi Jasmine! Thanks for reviewing, first off!

You love slash? To be honest, it is definitely growing on me after writing this piece!

That is one of my favorite lines! There is so much meaning behind it, not just in a sexual manner, so I'm glad you liked it!

Description? Oh, thank you! It's the one area where I know I'm really strong, sometimes I think I write too much, really.

To be honest, I didn't know who to pick. I loved the thought of Sirius, but didn't know who he would go with, so I finally decided on Remus. Such a great pairing, and so fun to write! The NC-17 stuff just kills me! I tried to keep it mature without it being overly ridiculous, ya know?

Everyone always says that about my stuff...they didn't find anything, except it was too short. I'm sorry it was so short and you didn't get to read anymore! But, thank you so much for the review, I appreciate more than you can know! :]]


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